I am not on here as much lately but truly thankful for your writing. The imagery, the struggle of being human, living in a place not our home... truly amazing. Thank you
Emily, this is so good. Wow. Just one interesting, surprising, emotionally gripping image one after another that pulls you in and in and in. And great literary work - the way these short sentences emphasize the anxiety and need to write - "Mind lost. Day 30. Wilderness littered with noise. Satan mocks me, where is thy God?
What to write, what to write."
And some FANTASTIC enjambments - "I picture murder of crows
I am not on here as much lately but truly thankful for your writing. The imagery, the struggle of being human, living in a place not our home... truly amazing. Thank you
Whoa. Awesome.
Emily, this is so good. Wow. Just one interesting, surprising, emotionally gripping image one after another that pulls you in and in and in. And great literary work - the way these short sentences emphasize the anxiety and need to write - "Mind lost. Day 30. Wilderness littered with noise. Satan mocks me, where is thy God?
What to write, what to write."
And some FANTASTIC enjambments - "I picture murder of crows
In a field of plenty long ago."
So good. you should be proud of this one
It's not that you need this information -but I find it so very relatable it's painful. Thank you for sharing